写作教程第2版课件u课件.pptxVIP

EnglishWritingII

Warm-upActivitiesIntroduceyouruniversity/dormitory/classroom...What’syouroverallimpressionoftheuniversity?Whichbuildingorlocationcatchesyourattentionfirst?Whichplacedoyouwanttodescribenext?Andthen?Whatdoyouwanttodescribelast?Whatorderdoesyourdescriptionfollow?Whydoyouchoosethisorder?

Reference:Inaparagraphdescribingyouruniversity,youmightdeveloptheparagraphbyspaceinseveraldifferentways:Youmightusesomeimportantlandmark,forexample,thelibrary,anddescribeotherlocationsinrelationtoit.Theorderinwhichyoudiscusseachlocationisnotasimportantastheirrelationshipswiththelandmark.

Youmightuseanimportantlandmarkasthestartingpointandmovefromittothenextlocation,ontoanother,andsoon,perhapsendingbackattheoriginallandmark.Anothertypeofdevelopmentbyspacemightstresstheboundariesofanarea.Theorderinwhichthesearelistedisnotnecessarilyimportantsolongasthereisalogicalprogressionfromlocationtolocation.Stillanotherspatialdevelopmentmightstresstheinter-relationshipsbetweenlocations.

Inthisunitemphasiswillbelaidontheorganizationalfeaturesofdescriptionbyspaceorspatialorder.

Developmentbyspaceorder:lefttoright,righttoleft,neartofar,fartonear,lowtohigh,hightolow,etc.

Pages26-27Readsample2andsample3andfinishthefollowingtasks.Analyzetheirparagraphstructures.123654Whataredifferentwritingtechniques/featuresinsupportingdescriptivewriting?Andtheirdifferenteffects?Summarizetheorderofthedetailsineachsample.Underlinethetransitionalsignals.

Sample2Questions:Whichisthetopicsentence?Thefirstsentenceisthetopicsentence.What’sthemethodusedtodeveloptheparagraph?Theparagraphisdevelopedinspaceorder.030201050406

Pleasefinishthefollowingpartialoutlineaccordingtohowthedetailsarearranged.1Thecentralfocusisadeplorablebar