冀教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 10 写作能力提升练 (4).pptVIP

**经典例题写作实践UNIT10GetReadyfortheFuture写作能力提升练九年级的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水,也有进步、喜悦。请根据下面提示,以“OurSchoolLifeinGradeNine”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍九年级的学校生活,并提出希望和建议。要点:1.在学校:老师认真负责,充满爱心;学生:……(至少发挥两点)。2.周末作业:作业多,舍弃爱好;周末活动:锻炼、看电视。3.愿望:……(发挥一到两点)。提示:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。2.短文必须包括所有要点,句式要多样化,上下文连贯。OurSchoolLifeinGradeNineIthasbeenmorethanhalfayearsincewebecameGradeNinestudents.Hereiswhatourschoollifeislikenow._________________________________________________［审题指导］1.体裁:说明文2.人称:以第一人称为主3.时态:一般现在时［思路构建］［范文赏析］OurSchoolLifeinGradeNineIthasbeenmorethanhalfayearsincewebecameGradeNinestudents.Hereiswhatourschoollifeislikenow.Inschool,ourteachersarepatientandcareful.Theyregardusastheirchildren.Theyareverykind.Whenwehavetroubleinstudying,theyalwaysoffertohelp.Westudentsstudyhardandallofuswanttomakeprogress.Westudywithallourhearts.Ontheweekends,wegiveupourhobbiesbecausewehavelotsofhomework.WeoftenexerciseandwatchTVovertheweekendtogetrelaxed.Ourschoolhasbeenverygood,butwewanttomakeitbetter.So,wewilltryourbesttogetgoodscores.高分点评:1.思路清晰,采用“总一分一总”三段式结构。2.第二段when引导的时间状语从句为文章增加亮点,最后一段连词but、so的使用,提升了文章的连贯性。3.亮点词汇:regard...as把……视为,havetroubleindoingsth.做某事有困难,makeprogress取得进步,giveup放弃。英语中有句谚语:“Greathopesmakegreatman.”你的理想工作是什么?什么经历或人使你有了这样的理想?为了实现你的理想,你将怎样做?请你就这一话题写一篇短文阐述你的想法。要求:1.短文须包括提示的所有要点,可以适当发挥;2.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。“Greathopesmakegreatman.”That’sanoldsaying,andit’strue._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Everyonehashisdream.Mydreamistobeateacher.WhenIw