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高三英语写作 -----How to write an argumentation（议论文） 书面表达(满分30分) 1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。 优点 缺点 待在家中 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界 外出旅游 增长知识，开阔眼界（horizon/view） 花费多，旅途不便 注意：1.词数120 左右 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. convenient and comfortable cost less / save money lose the chance of getting to know the outside world 2. increase one’s knowledge and broaden one’s horizons/views 1.(待在家中)花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界 2.(外出旅游)增长知识，开阔眼界 花费多，旅途不便 spend more money and meet some difficulties beginning have different views on sth / react to sth in different ways. differ in their attitudes towards sth. conclusion my opinion (待在家中) (外出旅游) The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. some others The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. People react to this problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more,they can save money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home,I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel. 词汇,句型 , 语法多样化 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 优秀作文标准： 1、覆盖所有内容要点； 2、语法结构或词汇方面有个别错误，但为尽量使 用较为复杂的结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较 强的语言应用能力； 3、有效地使用了连接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容 连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 审题不清：自己英语的学习目的、方法、课外途径