六种功能段落总结 (四级写作).ppt

* 六种功能段落总结 建议 观点（利弊） 意义（利） 现象 危害（弊） 原因 篇章层面：六种功能段落的排列组合 1. 问题解决型：2010年6月( spelling)、2010年12月( to be independent) 2. 观点对比型（利弊分析）：2011年6月(online shopping); 09年6月 (recreational activities) 3. 现象阐述型：2009年12月(green campus) 2.3观点对比型作文必背 段落组成：现象+利弊+建议 2011-06: Online Shopping 1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3．我的建议 1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 现象描述段：思路：引出话题 + 具体描述 In contemporary society, it has become a prevalent trend for individuals to purchase various goods from the Internet. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it convenient and inexpensive to do so. Taking a look around, we can find a great many shopping websites: Taobao, Dangdang and Amazon. 2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 （利）A number of people favor online shopping. In their eyes, without it, it is impossible for them to stay at home and get their favorite clothes, books and so on. In addition, they argue that shopping online can help them expand their scope of shopping choices and enrich their life. (下页续) （接上页）(弊) Even so, others hold a different view that online shopping carries some risks. Firstly, it calls for time, energy and money to shop online; however, the quality of goods is not always as satisfactory as expected. Besides, what worries many shoppers is that their private information may be stolen and misused. 3．我的建议 （主题句）As a customer, I am convinced that there are various ways in which we can enhance online shopping. （建议1）First, it is essential that regulations should be worked out and enforced to regulate the online transactions. （建议2）Then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates, and acquaintances to be alert when shopping online. （展望未来）If we try our utmost to do so, the future of shopping online will be promising, hopeful and rosy. 2.4 问题解决型必背范文 Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了让孩