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通过点睛之笔，提高作文层次 举例： 第一组： A is just another word for B. —— A就是B的代名词。 1) “ computer” is just another word for “convenience”. 2) “ computer” is just another word for “being modern”. 3) To me, “pressure” is just another word for “challenge”. 4) Freedom is based on “obeying rules”. So in my opinion, “rule” is just another word for “freedom”. 5) “ School” is just another word for “family”. 6) “friend” is just another word for “trust”. 第二组：One flower makes no garland (花冠). —— 这句是谚语表达要与人合作。 One flower makes no garland, so we should learn to share with others. I finally come to understand the importance of the teamwork, because one flower makes no garden. 第三组：Sadness and regret filled his heart. 表达他的后悔和难过。 Happiness and excitement filled my heart. Tears filled my eyes. 第四组：I think she was my friend, is my friend and will be my friend forever. 1) In my eyes, he was the best, is the best and will be the best. 2) My parents were the best, are the best and will always be the best. I will love them forever. 3) In my heart, my school was the best, is the best and will always be the best! 其他好词好句： 1) Nobody can decide the length of life, so we should save every minute, even every second. 2) There is always good time and bad time for us, but it’s important to remember both, because they are the treasure in our life. There will be good luck and bad luck in our life, but both are important, because this is life. What my father said makes me know that I can’t let the failure define me----I have to let it teach me. Failure sometimes is not a bad thing, it is usually the entrance to the success. So do not let the failure define you---- you have to let it teach you. e.g. The most important things in my life Use the following points as a guide: Q1: What are the important things in your life? Q2: Which one do you think is the most important thing? Q3: Why do you think so? 举例： Life is just like a painting, colourful and meaningful. There are always many important things that may h