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在写作过程中，我们发现学生主要在如下方面存在问题：关联词 过渡语、句式不能灵活使用、汉语式表达多。针对以上问题，我们主要采取分阶段专门练习。 一． 关联词过渡语 关联词和过渡语是联系文章的纽带，正确使用会使整篇文章流畅连贯。我们主要从两方面对学生加以指导。 １） 印发了常用关联词供学生背诵。 ２） 在训练中提高。语言不是孤立的，要想提高，必须在一定的语境中体会。　如下面的句子： 政府对残疾人很照顾，改善了公共设施。我希望高考会给我们提供更多机遇。学生是这样表达的。 The government shows its care to us in its efforts to improve the public facilities.I also hope the new reform of the college entrance examination will offer us more opportunities to study further. 使原句更生动可以在原文中加一个表达感情的短语。 To our joy/Fortunately,the government has done a lot to improve the public facilities,which shows their care to/for the disabled.I also hope that… 把这一节改成一句话，让学生填空。 Though the government shows its care to us in its efforts to improve the public facilities,I still hope the new reform of the college entrance examination will offer us more opportunities to study further. 　二． 句式 根据高考英语书面表达新的评分标准，要求考生注意表达方式的灵活性，所用词汇和句式的高级性，语言的简洁性。这也是大部分学生所欠缺的。 １）灵活且高级。 如在描写一副现代父母对孩子的溺爱的图片时，学生写出了下面一句话： Mother is in front of the boy and Grandma is at the back.Mother is holding all kinds of food which the child likes eating.Grandma is carrying the electronic piano and the drawing-board. 把它改成一个复合句使其句式更灵活高级。 In front of the child is his mother,who is carrying a lot of food for him and behind them is his grandmother,who is carrying an electronic piano and a drawing-board. His mother is walking in front with a lot of food in her hand.While his grandma is following them with a drawing-board on her back and an electronic piano in her hand. 又如，在一篇关于学生作弊原因的文章中，有学生这样写道： There are some reasons for this.First,there are too many difficult examinations.Second,some students don’t work hard and are too lazy to study.What’s more,to please their parents and teachers is also an important reason. 这一段落语法没什么问题，但因句式单一，整段显得很枯燥单调。如能对其中某一部分稍微发挥一下,或者换用一些高级词汇和句型穿插使用，感觉就很不一样。Eg. Some students find it hard to deal with so many difficult exams.And some lazy students don’t work hard,so they turn to cheating for higher marks.There are also some cheating