2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题13 社会发展类话题话题指导.docVIP

2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题13 社会发展类话题话题指导 实例指导1— 关爱老人问题 【写作任务】 据报导，在老年人所有的精神疾患中，由于孤独闭塞而导致的比例高达６① It is reported that up to 67% of the old people are suffering from metal diseases resulting from loneliness. ② This can attribute to several reasons. ③ One of them is that with the development of modern society, people in growing As far as I’m concerned, on one hand, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents no matter how busy we are. On the other hand, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the senior to help them lead a colorful life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society. 【范文点评】 该文层次分明、语言连贯，是一篇很有说服力的议论文。作者注重使用较高级的结构，如多次使用了精彩短语（下划线）、句型（斜体）和过渡词句（加粗）。人称和时态使用恰当，问题的分析到位，解决措施合情合理，反映出作者敏捷的思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。 【句型拓展】写“社会问题”类的作文还可以用到以下句型： 1. As is reported in the newspapers, ... 2. Nowadays, more and more people… 3. It is estimated that about 67% of … 4. The reason why… is that …. 5. It is not only because..., but also because…. 6. With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of people … 7. There are at least two reasons to account for ... 8. Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is…. Besides,…. The third one is…. 9. To sum up, the main cause of … is due to… 10. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ....; for another…. 11. Thus, this is the reason why…. 12. If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that… 13. Only in this way can we…. 14. Only with combined efforts can we…. 做，觉得空虚）。 第三段：提出我们该如何关爱老人（⑥解决措施一：孩子不管多忙都应多回家看看；⑦ 解决措施二：社会组织各种活动，丰富老人精神生活。），然后点出主题 （⑧ 只有关爱老人，才能建立和谐社会）。 第三步 分析要点及提纲，提炼关键单词和短语。 要点序号 关键单词和短语 ① report, up to 67% of the old people, suffer from, metal diseases, result from ② attribute to, several reasons ③ with the development of modern society, in growing numbers, busier and busier ④ go back home, leave their old parents alone ⑤ after retirement, have nothing to do, adds to ⑥ stay together