专题5 第1课时人物介绍.pptVIP

请根据以下信息，写一篇关于孙杨的短文： 1. 孙杨，中国的游泳新星,1991年12月1日出生，身高198cm，浙江杭州人，主攻中长距离自由泳。 2. 父母都是排球运动员， 遗传了父母良好的运动基因。小时候就被游泳教练看中并说服其父母带他去进行游泳训练。他现在的教练就是曾担任过澳大利亚游泳运动员Grant Hackett (10年前创造了1500米自由泳的世界纪录)教练的Dennis Cotterell。 3. 在2011年上海游泳世锦赛中，孙杨在800米、1500米自由泳两个项目上夺金，在4×200米自由泳接力中为中国男队获得铜牌而立下汗马功劳。 4. 他打破了1500米自由泳的世界纪录，成为打破奥运会游泳项目世界纪录的中国男子第一人。他书写了中国游泳的传奇，也让我们对2012年伦敦奥运会中国男泳的表现有了更多的期待。 参考词汇：自由泳 freestyle 游泳世锦赛 swimming world championships 【写作要求】 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 __________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Sun Yang, born in December 1st, 1991, Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, is good at middle-and-long-distance freestyle and has stood out as a new swimming star these years. With his parents both as volleyball players, the 198cm Sun has a natural gift for sports and when he was a child, his parents were persuaded by a swimming coach to take him to receive training in swimming. Now coached by Hacketts former mentor, Dennis Cotterell, Sun won two gold medals in the 800m and 1,500m freestyle, plus a bronze with Chinas 4×200 relay squad in the 2011 swimming world championships held in Shanghai. In the 1,500 meters, he broke the world record, for which he becomes the first Chinese man breaking a record in swimming as an Olympic event. This legend in Chinese swimming history has built up our confidence in a good job of Chinese mens swimming team in the 2012 London Olympics. 【思路点拨】 第一步：审题 本篇基础写作是人物介绍，需要首先确定基本的时态，人物的经历部分毫无疑问是过去时，而个人成就和后世评论可考虑现在时或完成时。 第二步：翻译基本要点，整合信息，分成5句话。在这个过程中，注意上下文之间的联系及时间线索的处理。 第三步：连句成篇，考虑合适的连接词，分词，从句，达到上下文连贯。 一、人物介绍写作步骤及常用词句： 1. age, birthday and birthplace (个人概况) was/were born in…(place) on…(date) 出生于某地某时 at the age of…在某人多少岁时 the son of a poor family 来自穷苦家庭的孩子 was born into a peasant family 出生于一个农民家庭 live/lead a happy/difficult life 过着幸福/艰苦的生活 2. characte