高中英语 Unit 4 Section Ⅳ Grammar Writing课件 新人教版必修1.ppt

写作专题突破 写作要求 5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100词左右的新闻报道。 1．时间、地点、人物、活动； 2．老人们的反应； 3．简短评论。 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计词数)。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly ________________________________________________________________________ By Chen Jie，School Newspaper 审题谋篇 1．本文要求写一篇新闻报道，注意新闻报道的五大要素，即时间、地点、人物、事件、发展如何(when，where，who，what及how)。 2．本文可采用这样的结构： 标题(已给出)——导语——正文——结语(简短评论) 3．新闻报道多采用第三人称叙述，时态采用一般过去时。以此为基点，“瞻前”是过去完成时，“顾后”是过去将来时。 写作要点 1．做志愿者工作 do some 　　　　　　　　　 答案：voluntary work 2．他们给老人们送花、送水果。 ①They　　　　some flowers and fruits 　　　　the elderly. ②They 　　　　the elderly some flowers and fruits. ③They 　　　　 the elderly 　　　　 some flowers and fruits. 答案：①gave；to　②gave　③presented；with 3．他们一到那儿，就受到了热烈的欢迎。 ①　　　　　　　　　　， they were warmly welcomed. ②　　　　　　　　they arrived there，they were warmly welcomed. ③　　　　　　　　，they were warmly welcomed. 答案：①Upon their arrival　②As soon as ③When they arrived there 4．做完一切之后，他们坐在院子里与老人们聊天。 ①　　　　　　　　，they　　　　　　　　　　the elderly people. ②　　　　　　　　　　　　，they sat in the yard and chatted with the elderly people. 答案：①Everything done；sat in the yard chatting with ②When they finished everything 5．他们说这是如此美好的一天他们永远都不会忘记。 ①They said it was 　　　　　　　　beautiful day 　　　　they would remember it forever. ②They said it was 　　　　　　　　day 　　　　they would never forget it. 答案：①such a；that　②so beautiful a；that 【连句成篇】 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day，Li Yue and Zhang Hua，students from Class Three, Grade Two，went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly wit