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2014年2月GMAT作文机经 　　1.公司研究方从mining technology到renewable energy 　　Blastcom Corporation的一封给stockholders的newsletter. 发现mining technology had a big drop last year. 作为能源公司, 它们打算要have scientists 把研究efforts全部转移到renewable energy technology research. 然后说其他研究新能源的公司近年盈利,所以他们打算转移研究方向.结尾是guarantee ; no decline关键字来说服stockholders 买stock. 　　one corporations profits and stocks prices fell in recent years, so advise to switch research efforts from mining technology to new renewable engergy technology, because the profits and stocks prices of the new renewable energy 一直稳定 or 上升 in recent years, so the switch will guarantee the success of the corporation in the future.(by: kb_phelps) 　　V1 由于全球对mining technology的需求降低，导致the declining of Blastcom corporations profits and stock prices. So Blastcom 打算让其科学家把研究方向从mining technology switch到renewable energy technology，由于 renewable industry is blooming and several other renewable energy companies have made a success, thus Blastcom will also be successful in this field and therefore keep its profits and stock prices safe from declining. 　　V2 Due to the decline demand of the mining technology, all the related corporations are suffering form decline of profit and sales this year, including Blastcom Corporation. Blastcom Corporation is considering adopting one growth strategy: to shift some of the researchers from mining technology to the renewable energy technology, the demand for the renewable energy such as solar energy. Some of the prominent companies which market the renewable energy are successful in recent years. Therefore, it is guaranteed that company Blastcom will also be successful in the future by providing renewable energy 　　结论：Blastcom Corporation说服stockholders 买他们的stock 　　论证过程： 　　因为 mining technology had a big drop last year，所以他们要转移研究方向;因为其他研究新能源的公司近年盈利，所以他们打算要have scientists 把研究efforts全部转移到renewable energy technology research;因为他们转移到了renewable energy technology research，所以他们能够guarantee no decline;因为他们能够guarantee no decline，所以stockholder