2008年广东省高考英语作文评分标准.docVIP

2008年广东省高考英语作文评分标准 Ⅵ 写作 基础写作 范文 Version 1 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compted in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from three events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. Version 2 It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history(1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participated in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896’s three events to today’s seventeen. 二、基础写作评分说明 基础写作主要是考查考生的语言结构的应用能力：能够应用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。 本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达[写作内容]所提供的全部内容。命题思想是要求考生在表达这些内容时能够： ⊙正确使用被动语态，比如： The contest was cancelled/None were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games/Women were first allowed to compete in Olympic shooting in 1968等。 ⊙表达并列、转折等关系，比如：and, but等. 在评分时， 应注意以下几个方面： 按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准给分； 在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；考生是否使用了合适的句型结构； 在内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达全部规定的内容；如果考生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分； 在连贯方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。 读写任务 读写任务评分说明 读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。 本试题要求考生阅读一则英文发言稿之后，写一篇英语发言稿，谈自己理想的大学生活，内容包括 概括发言稿；根据自己的经历发表对中学生活的感想；发挥想象力，描绘未来的大学生活（允许虚构）；概括现实的中学生活与想象的大学生活之间的差异，并思考如何适应这些差异。 在评分时，应注意以下几方面： 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分； Mike发言的要点包括： Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust himself to the college life. Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and rich activities. To Mike, the important thing is to get himself active in things. 3.写作的内容应该包括： ① 对大学生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而谈，也可以谈具体的某一方面； ② 想象中的大学生活，内容可以包括理想的大学、进大学前的心情（如：兴奋、担心等）、理想的大学生活（包括校园环境、学习环境、师生关系、社团活动等）； 概括中学生活与大学生活之间的差异，比如：大学生活更丰富、更自由，或大学生活更富有挑战性、更需要独立