高考英语作文之墙报.ppt

　　老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。 Today teacher asked me to see to the wall newspaper. I was so happy. And I want to accept the task. And why? There are some reasons that can explain it. And the important ones as follows. First of all, I was proud of seeing to the wall newspaper. What’s more, wall newspaper is the window of my class. It’s a difficult job. But I have the ability to do it. Why I give up? Last but not least, I’m good at painting. And my words is beautiful. And other students thought that I can do my best of it. In a whole, I’ll accept this task. (107) 专家点评 尙能表达作文要求，能使用简单的连接词。逻辑不够清楚，句型较单调。词汇也不够丰富。有一些语法和拼写错误，但不影响意思的理解，词数较少。 Today, I was required to be in charge of the class wall newspaper. I thought it for a while and then decided to take the job. Since the wall newspaper will be seen everyday. It’s form and contain are the most important. I think we can’t use only words. Some beautiful pictures are necessary. There should be some big items on it, and behaid it there can be our opinion about it. And we can give little common knowledge of all kinds of subjects and one or two jokes, all these makes it wonderful. Then I think every student in the class may do the work together. Some have good hand writing while others draw well. Every week we change it for a new one, a new topic. And I think, if everyone can take part in the job. Our wall newspaper will be the best one. (147) 专家点评 基本能根据写作题要求，将应该表达的内容写出来，语言较流畅。虽然有些语法和标点及拼写错误，但基本不影响理解。能用简单的连接词进行段落间的连贯。 Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the demand or not. Though in Class 4 for nearly 2 years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my effort to the class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent. However, I know that taking th