二轮复习书面表达讲课课件123.ppt

书面表达赏析 篇章结构,段落层次是否鲜明 要点是否全面完整 有无高级词汇和复杂结构 语言表达是否得体自然 Interestingly , our school called on students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal , I have made some changes in my way of life ,which ranges from transportation to water saving. For example , I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home , I even persuade my parents to reuse water , even though it is not so convenient .TV and computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead , which , I think , may help relieve the shortage of electricity. I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours ,  Chen Yu * * 书面表达赏析与训练 教学目标: 通过赏析能够自主写出与之类似的 文章, 达到有效运用所学语言知识来撰 写书信的能力. 1．提纲作文的特点 提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块， 以条目的形式列出，请考生根据这一情景及要求 写出自己的思想。这实际上是对考生思路和文章 写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中 所列举的要点要全部涉及到,一个也不能遗漏 . 2．写好提纲作文的能力 为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的 同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此, 该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性， 能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力 : 亮 点 提 取(2010年高考英语范文一) 1. appointed用得很好,put off 用得很好. 2．虚拟语气(If only I hadn’t swam in the lake! If only I weren’t ill)等, 3．使用了非限制性定语从句，复杂结构。 4．In the company of短语用得恰到好处。 5．suggest 后用虚拟语气. 6．After taking my tempreture分词的运用让文章显得很有活力 7.make it 用的恰到好处. 优秀高考作文应具备的几个基本特征： 1、要点齐全, 层次不乱 2、句式多变, 亮点若干 3、巧妙串联, 过渡自然 4、蠢错不犯 ,整洁卷面 假如你叫陈宇,你的英国笔友在上次来信中谈到了低碳生活这个话题.最近几个月你校倡导学生过低碳生活,过节约生活.请你用英文给Mike回信. 回信要点如下: 1.你对低碳生活的理解. 2.你校开展的活动. 3.你最近生活方式的改变(至少选取3个方面). 注意: 1.) 词数 为120-150 2.) 参考词汇: 低碳生活low carbon life(style) 3.)可以适当的增加细节,使行文连贯. 提纲类书面表达练笔 Dear Mike, How are things going ? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months. With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet.