2009高考英语写作讲解与训练--作文写作基础(如何写出好句子).docVIP

高考英语作文写作基础——如何写出好句子 一. 教学内容： 如何写出好句子 如何写出好句子：好句子的标准应是：用词准确、逻辑清晰、简洁明了、可读性强。 1. 学会运用复合句 复合句包括：名词性从句、状语从句、定语从句 用复合句增强句子之间的逻辑关系，使你的句子变得紧凑 ［练习］ 根据句子之间的关系，用正确的连词使其成为复合句。 （1）Children grow older. They prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents. When children grow older, they prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents. （2）I was very excited . I couldn’t express myself in words. I was so excited that I couldn’t express myself in words. （3）We will have a further discussion. We draw a final conclusion. We will have a further discussion before we draw a final conclusion. （4）The economy in this area is developing rapidly. The qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory. Although the economy in this area is developing rapidly, the qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory. （5）You are allowed to drive my car . You should drive carefully and slowly. You are allowed to drive my car on condition that/ as long as you should drive carefully and slowly. （6）The teacher had read my composition. He gave me his opinion. After the teacher had read my composition, he gave me his opinion. （7）You have got the secret. Please don’t spread it in public. If you have got the secret, please don’t spread it in public. （8）They arrived at the farm. They were welcomed by the farmers. The moment/As soon as they arrived at the farm, they were welcomed by the farmers. （9）The International Red Cross is an organization. Its purpose is to help the sick and the needy. The International Red Cross is an organization whose purpose is to help the sick and the needy. （10）I decided to find a job. I could earn the money. I decided to find a job so that I could earn the money. 2. 学会运用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词使你的句子简洁。 ［练习］ 运用非谓语动词完成下列句子： （1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa. Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa. （2）The prices of the computers which are being shown