如何提高我们的基础写作.pptVIP

如何提高我们的基础写作 Learning objectives (学习目标) Make a discussion to correct the basic writing in a group （互改作文提高句子写作能力） 基础写作 （来自单元测验卷） 请根据以下的情景说明,使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容. 写作内容 写一篇记叙你的英语老师Miss Michelle 1. Miss Michelle 来自加拿大,教我们英文. 2. Miss Michelle 今年28岁,身材修长,金发碧眼,参加过中国许多名胜古迹. 3. Miss Michelle教学有方,课堂生动有趣,严格要求学生，耐心回答学生问题. 4. 下月Miss Michelle 将要离开中国回加拿大. 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯 试卷作文情况分析 本作文贴近生活，能考查学生的基本语言表达能力！ 改错—独立完成 S1: Miss Michelle is come from Canadian, she teach our English. S2: Miss Michelle is 28 year old, she has a long body, gold hair and green eyes. S3: She joined in many China interest of place. S4: She teach is good, it is interesting, and she happy to answer our questions. S5: Next mouth, she leave China to Canada. 经典错误代表作—归纳错误类型（小组活动） S1:Miss Michelle cames from and she teached our English. S2:She is 28-years old, tall, she have yellow hair and green eyes, and she visited many Chinese interesting place. S3:Miss Michael is good at teaching, the classes of her are very interesting. S4:she is patient answering classmates questions. Sadly…S5:Miss Michael will leave China to come back to Candana in next mouth. S6:We will miss her in the future. 存在问题总结：方法点拨 1.单词拼写错误，动词的过去式过去分词拼写有误。 2.时态运用不当。 3.人称特别是主谓不一致。 4.信息不完整或多余。 5.句子结构错误。 6.缺乏一些好句型。 避免中文式英语的最佳途径： 加强朗读，背诵！ 优秀代表作 （找出好的地方） Miss Michael, who is a girl of 28 years old, is very tall and has golden hair and blue eyes. She comes from Canada and teaches us English. Interested in China, she has visited many places of interest in China. Miss Michael is good at teaching so that we all feel happy and funny in her class. Though she is very strict with us, she answers our questions in patience. It upset us that Miss Michael is leaving for Canada next month. 范文– 青出于蓝（分析亮点） Miss Michael, aged 28, is a fairly tall Canadian girl teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of interest since she cam