基础写作2011-2-22公开课.pptVIP

基础写作析与练 Basic Writing 第一部分：基础写作分析 基础写作的内容分类 应用文（欢迎词，建议信，投诉信，应聘信，日 记, 通知，便条，遗失招领启事，海报） 2. 人物写照 3. 地方介绍 4. 调查报告（2007广东卷：谁是你的偶像） 5. 事物介绍（2008 广东卷：奥运比赛项目射击） 6. 新闻采访（2009 近视问题；2010政府禁烟） 7. 看图写作（社会现象或寓言、成语故事） 8. 图表说明（表格，柱状图，曲线图，扇形图 如：近10年我国私人汽车拥有量的变化） 试题回顾 完成基础写作时要：1）养成重视审题的习惯。 A 篇点评 1. 语言错误多，达16个。如拼写错误Friday，prefer，As is known to us ; 谓语使用错误 are agree to ； 2. 中式表达：because of nice and right to as a gift.; show our heart 3. 遗漏信息点：自己制作礼物能够展现个人才能，培养动手能力，增强节约意识。 4.未能使用复杂句型增强文章表现力。 B 篇点评 1）能正反对比来写，文中恰当地运用了转折，上下衔接自然，如：however; in my opinion… 2）多种句型表达方式，用词恰当，生动。如：原因状语从句for … ；because ; 定语从句 which … ；I can’t agree more with the latter one because …；are in favor of ;convey one’s true blessing, unique in the receiver’s eyes. 3）观点鲜明，论据分类清晰，层次分明.如： …had a heated discussion; 60% preferred …for they think …. However, 40% are in favor of … 三、如何提高基础写作？ A组. 一句多译。 ①从2011年1月1日起，我国将在全国所有室内公共场所禁烟。 a. A rule released by Chinese government that it is not allowed smoking in public will come into effect on January 1, 2011 in the whole country. （同位语从句） b. The Chinese government has decided that smoking should be banned indoors in public places all over the country.（宾语从句） ②有3.5 亿人吸烟，其中男性75％，女性25％。 a. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. （定语从句） b. According to the report, about 350 million people smoke, of whom 75% are male and the rest are female. （定语从句） ③约5.4亿人受二手烟影响，每年超过10 万人死于二手烟。 a. About 540 million people suffer from the second- hand smoke, and, each year, about 100,000 people die from it . (并列句) b. Around 540 million people are affected by second – hand smoke, causing/resulting in （导致）100,000 deaths a year. (分词作状语) B组 按要求填空 ① 射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 a. Shooting is simply a means of making a living. It developed into a kind of sport at the end of the 19th century. b. Shooting, simply a means of making a living, developed into a kind of sport at the end of the 19th