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专升本写作讲座（二） 大学外语部 陈 勇 Tel:句型与词汇 短时间内对语句的文学性做出突破难度较大，所以， 我们应该把精力主要放在对句型和词汇的研习上。 试比较： 1. (1) I will consider your advice. (2) I will take your advice into consideration. 不难看出，(2)句把consider一词扩展成了一个短语 take into consideration，显得更加形象与生动。 2. (1) He gave me an unexpected visit. (2) He gave me a surprise visit. (3) His visit was really a great surprise to me. unexpected过于正式，太注重词义的对应，未免僵 硬。surprise则大众化一点，较为贴切。 (3)句则在句 型上更加灵活。 3. (1) It is raining heavily. (2) It is pouring. (3) It is raining cats and dogs. (1)句是一个很普通但意思又很完整的句子。(2)句的 动词pour则把句意表达得更形象、生动。(3)句则通过 一个短语强化了这一动感。 4. (1) It is good to be honest. (2) It pays to be honest. (2)句形象地说明了诚实能够带来回报。(1)句无论在 用词上还是意思表达程度上都显得肤浅。 5. (1) Do you sell books here? (2) Are books available here? (1)句过于拘泥于语法，主谓结构丝毫不差，但是句子有汉化之 嫌。(2)句更符合英语表达法，亲切、自然得体。 6. (1) I wish you have a good future. (2) I wish you enjoy a bright future. (3) I wish you embrace a splendid future. 本组句子纯属选词范畴，have, enjoy, embrace; good, bright, splendid两组词在感情色彩上层层递进，表达的感情也 不断加深。 再比较下面两组句子： 1. (1) The question is very difficult. (2) The question is very tough. (3) The question is really a headache to me. 2. (1) Because of your help, I could pass the exam. (2) But it had not been for your timely help, I couldn’t have passed the exam. (3) Thanks should go to your space-no-effort help, otherwise I couldn’t have passed the exam. 注： 1. 如果自己的词汇知识实在贫乏，在写作中，应该首 先保证句子词汇拼写、词性应用和句子结构方面的正 确性。 2. 当在句子写作中遇到生词时，可以利用单词的同义 词或者近义词代替，甚至于对相同的意思换种说法， 与其追求华丽而导致错误，不如坚持朴素，力保正 确。 3. 汉语文章中的许多富有文采、似显抽象的句子往往 可以用常见的英语词汇表达出来。 例如： 1. 他的业余生活丰富多彩。 2. 我非常喜欢这些充满生命力的旋律，它们就 像陈年佳酿。 3. 春天到了，经历了冬日严寒的寂静许久的田 野又一次变得生机盎然。 4. 他眼下的生活比以前更充实。 5. 我们的家乡人杰地灵。 Reference: 1. His spare-time life is colorful. 2. I really appreciate these melodies alive, like old wines. 3. With spring coming, the long-quiet fields during the cold winter becomes alive again. 4. He is now living a fuller life than before. 5