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2010年下半年BEC高级考试写作部分评分标准 写作部分的阅卷人在对考生的第一和第二部分的作文打分时都要参照一份通用评分标准。在这份评分标准里，考生作文被评价的方面包括内容、组织与衔接、词汇的丰富程度和准确性、语法结构的丰富程度和正确性、对目标读者的影响。所以，掌握评分标准后才能更好的、有目标性的去写作，以免让自己留下遗憾。 　　　　写作部分的评分 　　写作部分的阅卷人在对考生的第一和第二部分的作文打分时都要参照一份通用评分标准。在这份评分标准里，考生作文被评价的方面包括内容、组织与衔接、词汇的丰富程度和准确性、语法结构的丰富程度和正确性、对目标读者的影响，该标准所设定的分数尺度包括“0～56个分数，评分标准的内容就是规定了在这6个分数段内，考生作文在上面提到的几个被评价方面表现出的特点。除了这份通用的评分标准外，阅卷人还要同时参考针对各个题目分别拟定的不同的专门评分标准，这些专门的评分标准被用来描述上面提到的各个评价方面在各个题目中的具体所指，其作用是使得通用评分标准中的笼统描述有了统一的针对各个题目的具体含义。下面是BEC高级考试写作部分的通用评分标准： 与外商建立业务关系常见的写作例句 )We are willing to enter into business relations with your firm on the basis of equality , mutual benefit and exchanging what one has for what one needs. 我们愿在平等互利、互通有无的基础上与贵公司建立业务联系。 2) We wish to introduce ourselves to you as a stateoperated corporation dealing exclusively in light industrial goods. 我们是专营轻工产品的国营公司。 3) Being specialized in the export of Chinese art and craft goods, we express our desire to trade with you in this line. 我们专门出口中国工艺品，愿与贵方开展这方面的业务。 4)To acquaint you with the light industrial goods we handle, we are sending you, by separate airmail, a commodity list and several sample books for your reference. 为使你方熟悉我方经营的轻工产品，另封航邮寄上商品目录和一些样品，供你参考。 5)In order to give you some idea of various qualities of handicrafts we carry, we have pleasure in forwarding you by airmail one catalog and a few sample books for your perusal. 为使你方对我方各自款式的手工艺品有一初步了解，今航邮奉上我方目录和一些样品，供你方参考。 6)Having had your name and address from the Commercial Counsellor’’s Office of the Embassy of the People’’s Republic of China in your country, we now avail ourselves of this opportunity to write to you and see if we can establish business relations by the commencement of some practical transactions. 从驻贵国的中华人民共和国大使馆商务处获知贵方名称和地址，我们荣幸地写信给你们，是否可通过开始做几宗实际的交易来建立业务联系。 7)Your firm has been recommended to us by the Chamber Commerce in Tokyo, Japan. 日本东京商会已向我们推荐贵公司。 8) We thank you for your letter offering your services and should like to discuss the possibility of expanding trade with you.