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专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 极智批改网 Smartpigai 批改范文 写作原题2 考生原文3 批改过程6 总评分数8 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 写作原题 Thefollowing appeared as part of an article inamagazine devoted to regional life: “Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically ithas provided more than itsshare of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and developmentofinnovativetechnologies.” Discusshow wellreasoned.. .etc. 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 考生原文 The conclusion endorsed in this argument is that the city of Helios is a goodplace for companies to establish a new business. To justify the claim, the author proves several pieces of evidence. Firstly, the author points out that Helios has a lower unemployment rate than average. In addition, the author reasons that it is an industrial center. What’s more, the author also assumes that Helios is also seeking companies in order to expand its economic base. As we glance over the argument, the author’s argument is somewhatconvincing, butfurtherreflectionrevealsthatitomitssomething important that should be a