大学英语四级考试技巧解析-写作篇 2.pptVIP

1. 写作部分考核的技能 A 思想表达 1 表达中心思想 2 表达重要或特定信息 3 表达观点、态度等 B 篇章组织 4 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点 5 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 C 语言运用 6 运用恰当的词汇 7 运用正确的语法 8 运用合适的句子结构 9 使用正确的标点符号 10 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等） D 写作格式 11 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式 5.历年真题范文解析 Online Shopping (2011.6) How should Parents Help Children to Be independent? (2010.12) Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling (2010.6) Creating a Green Campus (2009.12) Free Admission to Museums (2009.6) Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008.12) Recreational Activities (2008.6) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 我的建议 2011年6月四级真题 Recently, we have experienced a flood of online shopping websites in our daily life. The number of people who choose to shop online is on the rise. There is no doubt that shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youths. 　　Obviously, Shopping on the Internet has opened up numerous benefits to us. To begin with, as is known to all, it is more convenient as online shopping offers us an extensive range of selection. Whats more, with online purchasing we can find radically lower prices and cheapest deals. However, on the other hand, the risks of online shopping can never be ignored. Firstly, it goes without saying that given the lack of ability to inspect merchandise before purchase, consumers are at higher risk of fraud. In the second place, merchants also risk fraudulent purchases using stolen credit cards or fraudulent repudiation of the online purchase. 　　In view of current situation, I hold the viewpoint that the government has the responsibility not only to lay down the effective laws and regulations to supervise this new