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第一部分 标题 Part I Guidelines： 　　1） Short and concise（简明扼要）：Write in one line (not a sentence); not containing an active verb; not exceeding 25 words or 120-140 letters and spaces; no abbreviations or chemical symbols except those that are generally accepted, e.g. DNA, RNA, AIDS, CT, etc.; 　　2）Informative（信息丰富）：State exactly what you want the reader to know about your paper and your work; 　　3）Indexing（便于索引）：Pack as many key words or indexing terms as possible into the title without overloading it; key words not in the title will be in the abstract or can go in the Key Words section of the paper; key words are usually in the beginning or ending place of the title. Correct the following titles according to the guidelines： 　　1）视网膜小血管变化是冠状动脉疾病的一个指标 　　Original: Retinal arteriolar changes are an indicator of coronary artery disease 　　Revised: Retinal arteriolar changes as an indicator of coronary artery disease 　　2) 用大剂量氨甲喋呤治疗急性淋巴细胞白血病的初步体会 　　Original: Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to treat ALL 　　Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia 　　或：Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia 　　3) 关于饮食中钾含量与血压关系的研究 　　Original: A research of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure 　　Revised: Dietary potassium and blood pressure 　 Part II Subtitles 　　为了满足标题写作的上述，有时对较长标题可采用副标题（subtitle）处理，如出现： 病例数时 对急症室连续170例腹痛病例的回顾性研究 　　Original: A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal pain in the emergency room 　　Revised: Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study of 170 consecutive cases 研究性质/方法时 用磁共振成象术对正常怀孕期间垂体增大进行活体内研究 　　Original: Use MRI (magnetic resonance imaging)to conduct an in vivo study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy 　　Revised: Pituitary gland growth during normal pregnancy: An in vivo study using magnetic resonance imaging 并列结构时 军队卫生防疫工作中出现的问题、原因与对策的初探 　Original: A preliminar