2013届市三模作文分析.ppt

①Su Hua and Li Jiang were not calm enough. Both of them attacked at each other by mean words. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. They didn’t realize that such a thing was common in such a close game. ②In my opinion, both Su Hua and Li Jiang were to blame. Because they were not calm enough and both attacked at each other by mean words. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. But ,as we all know, something like blocking, pushing and bumping is common in such a tough game. Para 3谈谈避免冲突的做法。 ①To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoying a peaceful life. It is also a virtue to forgive each other especially in such a competitive and stressful society. We should not blame each other but communicate more. What’s more, we must learn to how to handle such conflicts if we stood in the opposite side. ②To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. 　　Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. 　　To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 范文 　　To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful life. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place