ABC English Composition.ppt

ABC English Composition Zhou Hong Descriptive writing Picture describing Picture Describing Four steps The main idea The grammar The structure The vocabulary Structure Who?----- How many Character(s)? Who was the hero? When?----When did the story happen? Where?---Where did the story happen? What?----What happened? How?-----How did he feel? It was Sunday, Xiao Dong went to play in the park. (suddenly) he saw a little bird and caught it. Then he played with ( flew) the bird ( happily). Just then, he saw a little girl crying, because he couldn’t find her mother. A policeman came up and helped her. Xiao Dong looked at the bird (and his face turned red). He thought it also wanted its mother. So he let the bird (fly) away. Use the suggested questions as clues. Write at least 60 words on the topic To Be a Lovely Shanghainese. The pictures are for your reference.(根据文字提示， 以“做一个可爱的上海人”为题写话。词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格，图片供参考) Why should we be lovely Shanghainese? What should or shouldnt a lovely Shanghainese do? What are you doing to be a lovely Shanghainese? To be a lovely Shanghainese Shanghai is developing quickly. Every day thousands of tourists come to visit it, so we should act well to show that both the city and its people are lovely in order to be lovely Shanghainese,we should always be ready to help others. We shouldn’t speak loudly in public places or throw litter on the ground. I want to be a lovely Shanghainese. I am now studying hard and getting ready for the future. * * Four steps Who When Where What How Picture describing: He get up it was 7:20 last night. didn’t until Tom _____up at 7:20 yesterday. Jack _____up at 7:20 every day. gets got The little boy lost himself in the book. It is fine today, the children are playing in the swimming pool happily. Picture describing 静 After you read the books, you must put them back. You mustn’t throw them about. If you want to borrow some books, you should st