2012年高考英语复习课件：第30讲 Unit 5 The power of nature（新课标人教版选修.pptVIP

下面就介绍一下图画式开放作文的高分技巧： 1. 客观描述情景 开放式作文一般都有一个事件或一幅图画，因此，作为写作的第一步，应该对其进行客观的描述。在描述时，无需掺杂议论、情绪或评价，同时要注意描述要有主次之分， 详略得当。 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 2. 活用过渡词语 一篇好的文章，应该注意段落间的灵活过渡。因此，在“描述”和“阐述”之间，添加一个“过渡段”是不可缺少的。 “过渡段”可以是一句万能的套话，比如： As far as I am concerned, the picture is both meaningful and wonderful. 或者：In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well. 可见，“过渡段”扮演了承上启下的角色：wonderful呼应上一段，meaningful引出下一段。 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 3. 合理发表观点 所谓阐述，就是对所描述的事件进行评价，并表达自己的 感想。只需用简单的语言，讲出简易、平实的道理，没有 必要过深地挖掘图画信息，但有一点要做到，就是思想健 康，积极向上。 二、真题欣赏 请看下面的漫画，联系实际生活，以“Saving Water”为题 写一篇短文，词数120左右。 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】 1. 本文属于用图画提示的开放型作文，首先要仔细观察图画 ，弄清画面的含义，把握画面所反映的主题。 2. 本文可以采取三段论的方式：叙述图画，分析图画，提出 建议。 3. 叙述要简明扼要，分析要切中要点，建议需切实可行。 4. 要恰当使用衔接语使文章连贯。 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 【示例】 As can be seen/As is described/As is shown in the picture, the drinking water is running without anyone using it. The picture tells us now many people pay no attention to saving water. The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, water is the source of life, without which there could be no life on the earth. Second, there is very limited available water resources on our planet, and excessive using of water can make the situation from bad to worse. And this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world. 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should make all the people know the importance of water and the fact that water resources are limited. Second, we must pass some laws to punish those who waste water. Only in this way can we solve the problem of water- wasting. 第30讲 │ 作文点拨 【好词好句积累】 1. as can be seen/as is described/as is shown in the picture 正如在图画里可以看到的/正如图画里所描述的/正如图画 显示的 take … into consideration 考虑 to begin with 首先 from bad to worse 越来越糟 arouse