石室中学吴宗平——书面表达.ppt

In Senior 3, we are tense. The English teacher is tense, too. I have some suggestions for you. They are as follows. Please remember! First, speak slowly! Doing exercises again and again is also important. And, you should change your boring way of teaching and teach us better. If there are some approaches to teach me, you are so good. The last but not the least, reduce your homework. If you do as I tell you, I believe all of us can go to a good university! yours, Li Hua 主要问题： 1. 人文表达缺失 2. 文章结构残缺 3. 要点拓展太少 4. 用词表达偏废 …I owe you a great deal of gratitude because you, as a responsible English teacher, hope to receive suggestions from us students so as to go over lessons more efficiently during the last year of senior high. First of all, would you please slow down the teaching pace? Sometimes, I cannot follow you for my weak basis in English. Moreover, a repeated exercise is necessary. As is known, learning is a battle against forgetting. Furthermore, I’ll appreciate it if you offer me a smart approach of learning. I’m sure you have lots in store. Additionally, less homework can unload our heavy burden. What we really need is more time to refresh what you have already taught us. Again, I’m grateful what you have done and what you will do for us. (131 words) 书面表达要求： 1. 要点齐全，表达充分 2. 段落恰当，过渡自然 3. 词句达意，彰显智慧（核心） 4. 书写优美，视觉享受 一、利用已有句型，将其陌生化 1. 这是猫和老鼠第一次见面的房子。 This is the house where Tom and Jerry first met. Mr. Li Jun is a teacher where height, wealth and beauty meet.(Niubility) Miss He is a teacher where beauty and wisdom encounter. 二、将散句碎句合并成，将其书面化。 国庆节冷，天下小雨，唐老师百无聊赖，陪老婆逛街。 The National Day was cold, rainy. Mr. Tang had nothing to do. He decided to wander the street with his old girl. (Shability) It was cold for the drizzle on Oct. 1 when Mr. Tang realized it an opportunity to shop with his wife. (Niubility) 春熙路人山人海。 On Chunxi Road, people mountain and p