托福写作低分：头尾太随便.doc

托福写作低分：头尾太随便 小马过河为大家准备了“托福写作低分：头尾太随便”，供各位备考托福的考生们参考使用，来提高自己的托福成绩！免费咨询电话：400-0123-267 　　题目：A NEW ACQUIANTANCE OF YOURS IS THINKING ABOUT STUDYING YOUR NATIVE LANGUAGE. hOW WOULD U CONVINCE HIM OR HER THAT THIS WOULD BE A GOOD DECISION? USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND DETAILS IN YOUR RESPONSE. 　　In my point of view, there are a lot of reasons why one should study my native language-Chinese. Here are some of them. 　　China is acountry with a long and amazing history.And the Chinese culture is beautiful and captivating.And normally, the language is the key to know a whole new culture. I think Chinese is very interesting and mysterious. Not only the spoken Chinese, but also the characters are form thousands of years ago and is created by our ancesters with great wisdom. With the ability of reading and speaking Chinese, people would be able to read some splendid works like by Confucious and . 　　In addition, I think that learning a new language can test peoples ability of imitating and train his or her brain. Because Studying is a life-long task and is significant throughout ones life. And learning a language especially enrich his or her live and make people wiser. 　　Last but not least, nowadays Chinese is the language which is spoken by the most people in the entire world. This indicates that the ability to speak Chinese is very important in working and living. The lastest reserch shous that several countries are short of Chinese teachers, therefore as the Chinese old saying goes, the things that rare are precious. And the people with this skill may get a really good job with high salary. Then we can see the importance of learning Chinese in the presence world. 　　As a conclusion, from all the reasons above, Chinese is worth leaning adn is of great importance, I suggest people to learn and experience its beauty. 　　评论： 　　头尾太随便,这是个硬伤. 　　每段论述上也还是有些问题,第一段写的其实ok，但“the language is the key to know a whole new culture”其实可以提前一点，这样中心句更清楚。第二段草草了事，而且像是硬凑出来的一个point，因为说的都是学习新语言的好处，但新语言一定是汉语么?最后