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Picture writing 同济中学 高海蓉 简要描述图片内容，就图片主题谈谈自己感想。 你们让我自己骑好吗？ Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the ___________ . ii) Relate the _________ to a certain ____________ iii) Present your ___________ picture picture phenomenon opinion 简要描述图片内容，就图片主题谈谈自己感想。 Useful skills to describe a picture 1.在图中， 2.正如我们在图片 中所能看到的， 3.正如图片所示， As we can see in the picture, … As is vividly shown in the picture, … In the picture, Useful skills to introduce a phenomenon 当谈到…时 2. …是很普遍的 3. 最近…现象引起了广泛的关注 When it comes to… It’s common that… Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that… Useful skills to present your opinion 就我而言 In my opinion/In my view/As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view 我认为 I hold the view/opinion that… I’m of the opinion that… I think/believe/consider that… 我的理由如下 My reasons are listed as follows. The following are my reasons. Practice writing the first paragraph Write a clear beginning of a composition, following the 3 steps. picture phenomenon opinion briefly reasonably clearly Polish the beginning Step I Step 2 Step 3 Describe the picture briefly. Relate the picture to a certain phenomenon reasonably. Present your opinion clearly Polish the beginning _______________________ ， when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all her family members were around, protecting her __________ anything unexpected should happen, which did _______ the girl as she really wanted to manage it herself. It’s a common _________ that parents care too much about their children. ________________, I don’t think it wise for parents to _________________________. My reasons are_____________: AS is vividly shown in the picture in case annoy phenomenon As far as I’m concerned overprotect their children listed as follows （首先）__________________, too much love from parents will __________________ a child and ______________________________(使孩子很难)to _____________________ with others because