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句子的统一性和连惯性 句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的，最简单的解释是：意思完整、主次分明、前后连贯。从语义上看，句子各部分应该是精密联系在一起，表达一个完整的意思；从语法角度来看，正确的句子应该是结构严谨、关系一致、语序正确；从修辞角度来看，好的句子应该是中心突出，逻辑性强，准确简练。如果一个句子表达的意思不完整，主次关系不明确，逻辑关系混乱，那么这个句子的统一性和连贯性就遭到破坏，句子就有语病，读者也就无法了解作者的本意。如下列句子在统一性和逻辑性方面就存在问题： My uncle is a heavy smoker and he owns a large company in Nanjing. We ate our breakfast and we went to the classroom. We work very hard because we are students. The rain stopped when Jane died. The car slowly rumbled to a halt as I realized we had run out of gas. Three hours were too long for a film. We have been living in Beijing for 20 years before we moved to Nanjing. Our school team played very hard and the rival team was beaten by us. If one works hard, they will not fail. We went to the library and the seats were already taken. Come in and take a look and you must find something to your need. Being very poor and not want to trouble anyone else, Mary goes to class without breakfast. My wife is thirty, very kind, very beautiful and a very good mother. She is not only a triple-A student, but also respects her teachers. We should all be conscious and sensitive to our environmental deterioration. 二、好句子的标准 完整 完整是好句子的第一要点。 Li Bai was one of the greatest poets. According to the requirement, writing a composition. 连惯 连惯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病：平行结构有缺点、代词指代不清楚、逻辑主语和句子主语不一致、以及人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。 A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. He fell down stairs, but it was not serious. In order to give his wife a pleasant surprise, a bouquet of red roses was ready. Come early and you’ll see him. Those who wish to take CET-6 tests are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper. Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Don’t rely on your teacher’s help. We reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done. 简洁 In my opinion, I think the plan is feasible. My mother is a kind and pretty women. Girls usually like all kinds of theatrical make u