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BEC HIGHER EXAM Writing Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago, and it now has branch offices in four states, and it employs nearly 400 individuals. Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago. With branch offices in four states, it now employs nearly 400 individuals. A. They bought a bicycle in Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00. They bought a bicycle for $25.00 in a small shop in Beijing. I’m deeply convinced that there will be a large amount opportunities for the merged company cause they can learn more skills and reduce cost. It is benefit for us to rationalize staffing. We will together to work hard. They said, even they merge ABC Insurance, they will not give up them. However, they will put together to improve their economy. Part 1 Graph Analysis(图表分析) Part 2 Letter, Report or Proposal 商务信函 * He was warned not to drink water even in a restaurant which had not been boiled. He was warned not to drink water which had not been boiled. We have begun to export our machine to countries abroad. We have begun to export our machines. These brakes can stop a car within a short distance. These Goodson power brakes can stop a 2-ton car within 24 feet. We require furniture which is of the new type. We require new-type furniture. We hope the equipment will be delivered to our company as soon as possible. Please deliver the equipment to our company before next Friday. Time limit: 70 mins Part 1: Graph Writing: (120 -140 words) Part 2: Business Letter, Business Report, or Business Proposal (200 – 250 words) Band 5: (9-10分) 很好地完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果，给读者的印象颇佳。 ? 内容覆盖了所有要求的信息点； ? 语言自然流畅，错误极少； ? 语法结构和词汇表达丰富多变； ? 文章结构完整连贯，层次清晰； ? 语域与格式使用正确。 Band 4: (7-8分) 较好地完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果，给读者的印象良好。 ? 信息点完整，覆盖了所有要求的信息点，可能有少的遗漏； ? 语言自然，在使用复杂语言时才出现一些错误； 语法结构和词汇表达较为丰富； ? 文章结构较为完整，连贯性好； ? 语域与格式使用基本正确。 Band 3: ( 5-6分) 基本完成试题规定的任务，对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果，给读者的印象较好。 ? 覆盖了重要的信息点，但有小的疏漏； ? 比较规范，尽管在进行一些大胆尝试时有一些并不妨碍作者与