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2014 年7 月29 日星期二 201 教室六级强化 2012.6 图画作文范文分析 • Directions ： • For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. • You essay should start with a brief description of the picture. • You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication 段落结构： Para 1: 描述现象，引出话题 （2-3 句） [1] The picture gives us a vivid description of a familiar scene in which a father is asking his daughter about her school day, with the intention of /aiming at chatting with her.[2]However/ Nevertheless, his daughter brings the conversation to a halt by asking her dad to read her blog. [3]It is self-evident that the Internet has exerted such a profound influence/impact on[给…带来巨大影响] interpersonal communication that sharp focus should be brought on[ 高度重视] it. para 2: 阐述影响，具体论证。[6-8 句] [4]Numerous driving factors could be found to support my argument.[原因过渡句] [5]Initially,/To start with, in the era of advanced science and technology, the Internet is on the upswing[正在增 长/ 发展] accordingly[ 随之]. [6] Therefore, quite a few[许多] people ，youngsters in particular[尤其] ，are always willing to spend much of their time online instead of[而不是] setting aside time to[腾出时间做.] accompany /stay together with their family. [7]Additionally ，/In addition, it is universally acknowledged that[众所周知] the Internet deprives us of the delight of communicating in person[面对面，亲自]. [8] A common case in point is that[例如] we can hear our friends’ voices, see our family’ expressions, and even hold our classmates’ hands when we are talking to them in reality, which is much more enjoyable and comfortable to some extent [在一定程度上]. Para 3: 给出评论，建议措施 [3-4 句] [9] I am firmly convinced that the existence of the Internet would not necessarily be a bad thing. [10] As a consequence, people should not be