高二英语某作文评分细则.docVIP

书面表达 (满分25分,字数不够15分以下！) 书面表达评分标准及参考范文 One possible version： Summer vocation is coming near. Aside from a lot of homework, I think it necessary to plan some meaningful things. My suggestions are as follows. First, I recommend reading classic literature, because classics are the antiques of the literary world. They are examples of great writing and wisdom. By reading classics. we can not only appreciate great writers’ works but also make ourselves cultured. At the same time, our ability of reading and writing can be improved. Music is another thing we should remember to do. As students, listening to music can relax ourselves from the pressure of learning. In some ways, music is good for our health. Sometimes, when we feel tired, we can listen to music. Then we will feel very comfortable. And when we feel sad, we can also listen to music, which can give us a lot of happiness. If you are interested in art, I suggest you go to some art exhibitions, especially those of masters. Don’t think they have nothing to do with you and your study. As far as I am concerned, art is good for us. By appreciating art works, we can develop our sense of beauty and become more imaginative and creative, which are inevitably beneficial to our study. I hope every one of us will lead a productive life in the approaching summer holidays. 一、评分原则 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量, 确定或调整档次, 最后给分。 3. 词数少于130或多于170, 从总分中减去1~2分。 4. 评分时, 应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时, 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差, 以至影响交际, 可将分数降低一个档次。 二、内容要点 1. 读古典文学的两点好处。 2. 听优美音乐的两点好处。 3. 看大师画展的两点好处。 三、各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 ●准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容, 要点无遗漏 ●应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ●语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误, 但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 ●有效地使用了语句间的连接成分, 使全文结构紧凑[来源:学,科,网Z,X,X,K] （很好）[来源:学科网] （21~25分） 第四档 完成了试题规定的任务。 ●比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容 ●应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 ●语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确, 少许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ●应用简单的语句间的连接