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中文提示写作 （2006北京卷） 国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。 姓名：王姗 性别：女 年龄：16岁 学校：北京阳光中学 其它：爱好音乐、摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平 参加夏令营的目的： 结交朋友，了解外国文化 ① 语言的准确性 ② 句式的多样性 ③ 上下文的连贯性 评分原则： 1. 文章的内容 2. 语言的质量 要点是否齐全 审题 文体：自荐信 人称：我 时态：一般现在时 优秀的习作： I am Wang Shan, a girl of 16, studying in Beijing Sunshine Middle School. It’s really good news for me to know that a camp about peace and friendship will be held. I’m crazy about music and photography. In my spare time, I often play the piano and take pictures. I have no difficulty communicating with people, since I am quite easy-going and always ready to offer help. Nature and peace is the basis of happiness, which is all I desire. Believing I can make more friends and know more about foreign cultures in the camp, I am eager to be admitted. ------ 优秀的习作： I am Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl from Beijng Yangguang Middle School. I want to participate in this activity during summer vacation. I have a lot of hobbies, such as listening to music, taking photos and so on. The most important thing is that I am good at communicating with others and I always give a hand to anyone in trouble, so I have a lot of friends. I love nature and I love peace as well. The reason why I want to join the activity is that I’d like to make more friends and learn some foreign cultures. I believe that this activity will make my vacation rich and colorful. ------ I’m Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I’ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends’ help, and I am willing to help anyone in need. I love life; I love Mother Nature;