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作文总结 主要优点: 例证丰富，反映出较广的知识面 主要问题： 语法错误 书面语与口语混淆 文体 注意使用适当的文体，学校写作课及考试测验中一般要求为议论文，目的是帮助我们增强用英语清楚表达观点的能力。所以，作文中不鼓励写随笔似的文章，容易写得散漫；而在日记中，或者给友人的信中，则可以随意使用。 英语中的四大文体：描写文、记叙文、说明文、议论文。（参见公共邮箱《英语写作手册》） 写作前还应考虑读者的身份，如果是写给小孩的，语言应尽量简单；如果是写给阅卷老师的，则要尽量展现你对语言的掌握程度。我们应该以外国人作为想象中的读者，那么使用“守株待兔”的典故时，就要小心地解释这个故事的意思。 文章的三个标准： （1）立意(Original idea)：论点鲜明有新意。事例部分如果是大家熟悉的，叙述时应该一笔带过，重点放在对该事例的分析上。切忌简单的事实罗列，如： The Diversity of Beijing Beijing has a long history and is China’s political and cultural center. You can find old buildings and modern technology here. People from different provinces and countries come here, bringing their own languages, costumes, customs and food here. Beijing will be better and better tomorrow. （结尾避免空洞的口号） （2）结构(Organization)：篇章布局清晰，逻辑严密。各部分比重平衡，不能虎头蛇尾。有中心论点、分论点和新颖、丰富的论据加以支持；文章要分段，一段一层意思。段落不宜过长，段落之间注意过渡。Correct-fluent-natural-elegant 多样性（variety）: 词性（part of speech）、句式多样 (如定状语从句、分词结构)，长短句结合。同一短语或关键词避免密集性的重复出现: We all want to succeed, but not everyone can succeed. People who have succeeded usually worked very hard. --We all want to succeed, but not everyone can be successful. People who have achieved success usually worked very hard. 如表示因果关系：so, therefore, as a result, in consequence, consequently, that’s why, etc. ② 新颖（novelty） 避免陈词滥调 (cliché)： Every coin has two sides. more and more 使用适当贴切的修辞手法（figure of speech如比喻、排比等）、幽默元素，等等。 ③ 语言的凝练（complexity） 能正确使用比较复杂、文雅的词汇，以及概括性的语言。口语化的表达，如Today I’d like to say that/ First I wanna talk about等，不宜出现在正式的文体中。 We often say to our friends, “Good luck to you!” --We often wish our friends good luck. People always say “What a bad luck!” when they have failed. --People always blame their failure on bad luck. 一个略微极端的例子： Beijing is a lively place, because here people from different places live together peacefully, bringing with them their own cultures. --The harmonious coexistence of diverse ethnic groups and their respective cultures contributes to Beijing’s vitality. Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. Their chie