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Medical Essay Writing Lecture One: Uniform Requirements for Manuscripts ( ICMJE ) Lexical and Grammatical Features of Medical Essay Lecture Two: Medical Essays Title Writing Lecture Three: Abstract Writing On Objective Methods Lecture Four: Abstract Writing On Results Conclusion Lecture Four: Medical Essays Abstract Writing on Results and Conclusion 结果(results) 的写作 结果部分重点阐述研究中观察到的现象, 发现的问题, 确定的关系等内容, 是摘要的精髓, 直接关系产生什么样的结论, 因此, 切忌笼统、空洞的描述, 应该清晰具体,使用定性、定量的词汇和数据资料, 尽可能使用规范术语。 英译时, 由于结果部分是叙述从已完成的研究中所获得的结果, 同方法部分一样, 发生在撰写论文之前, 故谓语动词常用一般过去时。 如果结果阐述的是客观存在或基本规律, 也可用一般现在时。 1) 分组进行研究的结果表述: 既可综合表述, 也可把结果分开表述 妊娠高血压综合征组血浆TGFβ1 水平为(4106 ±0187)ng/ ml , 明显高于对照组(1182 ±0135) ng/ ml ( P 0.01) ,妊娠高血压综合征组胎盘组织TGFβ1 表达较对照组明显增高( P 0.01) , 且随病情严重程度的增加而升高。 The TGFβ1 level in pregnancy induced hypertension ( PIH) group was significantly higher than that in normal group (4106 ±0187) ng/ ml VS. (1182 ±0135) ng/ ml ( P 0.01) . Expression of TGFβl in placenta increased significantly in PIH group compared with the normal group ( P 0.01) , furthermore the elevation is companied with the severity of in PIH group than in the normal group ( P 0.01). 妊娠高血压综合征组血清slL26R 为(19617 ±1219) μg/L , sgp 130 为(37914 ±7913) μg/ L ; 对照组血清slL26R 为(17418 ±4612) μg/ L , sgp 130为(25414 ±3417) μg/ L 。 In the study group , slL26R was ( 19617 ±1219) llg/ L ; and sgp 130 was (37914 ±7913) μg/ L. In control group I , sIL-6R was (17418 ±4612) μg/ L ; and sgpl30 was (25414 ±3417)μg/ L. 2) 采用总结式方法表述: 最常见的是直接用1 、2 、3 等数字列出结果。 ①SUI 和POP 患者子宫韧带平滑肌束比较细碎, 排列较凌乱, 韧带胶原处于代谢活跃状态; ②绝经前后POP 组和SUI 患者子宫韧带胶原原纤维直径明显大于对照组( P 0.01) ; ③各组研究对象主韧带与宫骶韧带的测量结果相近,主韧带与宫骶韧带胶原原纤维直径显著相关( r = 01988 , P 0.01) 。 ①The smooth muscle fascicles in the patients with stress urinary incontinence ( SUl ) and pelvic organ prolapse ( POP) were thinner. Arrangement of smooth muscle fascicles was in disorder. The collagen constituting the ligaments was active in metabolism. ②The mean collagen fibril diameters of uterine ligmants in the pre-and-post men