学术英语 科技文写作 语法及文体错误的分析.pptVIP

Scientific Paper Writing Part I Analysis of Grammatical and Stylistic Errors I. Comma Splice (逗号叠加) False： （1）Technology never exists in vacuum, it is embodied in products, processes, and people. （2）Stevenson’s romance are entertaining, they are full of exciting adventures. II. Choppy Style(文体紊乱) Sample 1: First draft: We have established a communications Systems (CS) Planning Team (1). This team includes user representatives from each of the 12 departments in the Forever-Seal Division（2）.We hold regular meetings to assess state-of-the-art-communications equipment (3). We discuss how new