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6. I will remembered that day forever. 10. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before. 16. We played snow in front of house. 22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart. How should we check the passage? 1. 查主题，文章是否符合题目要求，内容是否完整。(check the theme) 2. 查语法，是否有时态错误，是否有主谓不一致，是否有语态问题，是否有词形错误，是否有不合乎搭配的词组。(check the grammar) ３．查标点，是否有标点错误 (check the punctuation) 4. 查拼写，是否有拼写错误和大小写问题 （check the spelling) 5．查表达，是否有不合乎英语惯用的表达，是否有中国式英语表达。(check the ways of expression) 1.Environment is very important for us. 2.In our life, the problems of our environment are very important. 3.We have hurt it too much by cutting down trees and pollute water and land. 4.I want to be a environment protector so that save it. 5.I’d suggest my parents to take bus instead of drive car. 7.I will progress my habbits such as use a basket or a paper bag. 8.If everybody can do somethings to protect the earth, our environment will be much beautiful. 6.I will prevent people throw rubbish everywhere. to polluting in order to save it/so that I can save it take a bus instead of driving a car from throwing develop good habits using something much more beautiful serious an environment 1 2 3 4.2 5 6 7.1 8.1 4.1 7.2 8.2 1. 是否有大小写错误(capital letters or lowercase letters) 是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes) 是否有标点错误 (punctuation mistakes) 4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes) 主谓是否一致 动词的时态 语态的使用是否正确 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 … Common Errors in English writing During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuond’t found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others. The most unforget