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写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。 一、使用高级词汇 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 As far as Im concerned，parents much protection will do more harm than good to childrens future development. →As far as Im concerned，parents limitless protection will do more harm than good to childrens future development. I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay. →I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didnt reply to you without delay. 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 To achieve ones dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. →To achieve ones dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects. 3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。 1．We all have the same chance.____________ 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. ____________ 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.____ ______ 4．He didnt listen to what I said in the class. ______________ 5．Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.______________ 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.______________ 答案：1.possess　2.endless　3.put up with　4.turned a deaf ear to　5.promote　6.challenging 二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1．恰当使用被动语态 ①We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015. →About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015. ②Im delighted to know that the Shan