网络平台下的英语教学祥解.ppt

* * * * * * * * * “Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish, and he feeds himself for a lifetime.” * I. Structured Writing A General Statement Supported by Details A general statement (G.S.) Detail 1 Detail 2 Detail 3 Structured Writing Sample Structured Writing 1. A Sample Lifeless objects especially helped Chaplin make “contact” with himself as an artist. He turned them into other kinds of objects. Thus, a broken alarm clock in the movie The Pawnbroker became a “sick” patient undergoing surgery; boots were boiled in his film The Gold Rush and their soles eaten with salt and pepper like prime cuts of fish (the nails being 45 removed like fish bones). G.S. D1 D2 2. Your task Write a short composition with a general statement and its corresponding supporting details. Topic: The Hazards of Movie-going Structured Writing Sample Although I love movies, I’ve found that there are drawbacks to movie-going. One problem is just the inconvenience of it all. It can take me long time to drive to the theater and find a parking spot. Another problem is my lack of self-control at the theater. I often stuff myself with unhealthy calorie-laden snacks for the limited choices. The worst problem is some of the other movie-goers. Kids run up and down the aisle. It’s noisy and messy in the theater. All in all, I would rather stay home and watch TV comfortably. Sample Structured Writing Topic-related Writing Topic 1: My View on Success 1.成功的因素很多（如勤奋，能力，外界环境，机遇等等） 2 我认为最重要的因素是。。。 3 我的理由 Topic 2: The Most Unforgettable Person in My life 1. 描述最难忘的一个人 2. 为什么难忘 3. 对我人生的影响 Step 1 Group Work: Brainstorming: 1. Discuss in your group and try to figure out as many factors to success as possible: e.g. diligence, capabilities, opportunities, determination… 2. Can you find useful words, expressions and patterns in the text? Please list them on your paper. e.g. …give sb. Permanent fame. come down in the world Step 2 Writing Online Draft: Word Processor