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* 浙江省高考书面表达结论段（表建议）的写作策略 I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. 内容----针对性强; 能引起读者共鸣 2. 框架----两个建议,一句话总结 3. 表达 --- 用词自然、高级，句式多样，句际间连贯性强。 （2011浙江卷的参考范文关于提建议的结论段） 1. 2009年书面表达的最后一段的要求是简要评论志愿者活动。 2. 2010年的要求是评论李越的事迹及对同学的影响。 3. 2011年的要求是提出整治随意涂写和乱扔垃圾的行为的建议。 浙江省的高考书面表达分析 描述现象 结尾段：对现象评价或给建议 2012年台州一模 结尾段要求学生就某高中发文通知：学生上学、放学必须有父母接送；禁止所有同学骑自行车来校上学,给校长提出建议和理由 浙江省的高考书面表达结论段（表建议）的写作策略 一、段落框架 二、内容 三、句子表达 表观点的词汇 Personally\From my perspective\As far as I am concerned (aware) \ In my opinion\ From my point of view I do hope\ firmly believe\suggest \recommend\demand\urge that…. 一、段落框架 表建议的词汇 1.Firstly\ To begin with, Secondly\What’s more\In addition\ additionally \Moreover\Besides\Furthermore\，Most important of all\Last but not least\ Finally 2. For one thing , for another ; On (the) one hand , on the other hand 建议句的框架 2个建议 结尾句 主题句 2-个建议 只需3-4句 1 2 常用的连接句子的方式 副词 Luckily, obviously，actually, instead , however, despite, 短语 to my surprise, rather than, as for, as a result， in terms of, in spite of 句式搭配 As is often the case（这是常有的事），…….， ……not only…..but also… …….so that…. 构思的三个角度 1.对前面陈述的内容，进行总结。 2. 倡导大家采取行动 3. 用经典话语概括. 总结句 all things considered, in conclusion, to sum up, in a word, If so, if not 总结词 To sum up， only in these ways can we realize our dreams . It’s high time we should take measures to solve the problem. 1).Remember, every contribution counts. 2). Remember, a small step makes a big difference. ___________________, on the one hand, ______ students living far away from school, it’s an appropriate measure to let them live in the school dormitories and go back home by bus once a week on the grounds that _______