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* * 佳作赏析开放式——漫画类 (2010·福建高考) 假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 上一页 上一页 注意：1.根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯。 2．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 4．词数：120左右。 参考词汇：短缺 shortage　　　　 资源 resource Ladies and gentlemen， Good morning, Im Li Hua from Fujian，China. Its my great honour to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 1．话题特点：这篇书面表达为开放式作文中的漫画类。这类作文一般在提示信息中给出一段素材(文字、图画、表格提示等形式)或主题，让考生在此基础上充分发挥想象，自由创作，不受文体形式的约束。开放式写作不仅考查考生的语言运用能力，同时考查他们的逻辑思维以及多角度的创新思维能力等综合素质。 上一页 2．写好这类作文要注意： (1)了解开放式作文的写作特点。明确主题，根据主题构建文章结构，在写作过程中突出主题。 (2) 详略得当。本文应重点写的是该图片的现实社会意义和影响。 (3)人称和时态。用第一人称和一般现在时。 上一页 3．常用的表达方式： (1)描述图片内容： As the picture shows.../As is shown by the picture.../We can see from the picture.../In the picture ... (2)联系社会现实意义： I think it reflects .../The picture tells us that ... (3) 结束语： In my opinion，.../Personally, I think we should.../In a word, we should... 上一页 Ladies and gentlemen， Good morning. Im Li Hua from Fujian, China. Its my great honour to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, its high time we did something about it. 上一页 Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least, its everyones responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life. In conclusion, people around t