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Linking Fill in the gaps with the words: in the end, while, first, then, after that Linking (sequence) before…; when; as soon as; while; at the same time; as; after…; first/ first of all; after that; during; later; suddenly; then; next; finally; in the end; at last Question From this passage in the textbook, what really makes a complete description of a party ? Layout (1) introduction to the situation (2) the beginning (3) development (4) conclusion About the introduction 1.The introduction should be brief but clear. It introduces the reason, the place, the time and the people of the event. 2.Usally it begins with the time, such as One day/Yesterday/Last Saturday/One Sunday morning/on July 31,2006/It was one of my summer holidays. About the beginning and the development 1.The beginning and the development describe something happened in the event, so sometimes you can join the two parts into one. 2. You need to use some linking words such as first, then, after that, while, in the end and so on to tell the order of the event. About the conclusion 1.The conclusion plays an important role in a composition. A good conclusion can cause readers to sympathize and think further. 2.Usually a description of an event ends with personal feelings, such as It was a great party./I felt very happy./My heart was full of joy./ I’ll never forget…/It was the happiest time in my life and so on. Some topics 1. An Unforgettable Party 2. Go On a Field Trip 3. A Visiting to Great Wall/ Hainan Island/Hong Kong 4. An Exciting Basketball Match 5. I Have Done a Good Deed Before the writing In groups, work together to discuss : 1.What topic will your group write about? 2.How will you describe the events? Writing Write a description of an event with over 100 words, reading Writing Help 3 on page 91 for reference. Talk back Work in groups, read each other’s descriptions. Give each other ideas on how to improve or correct your descriptions. Decide whi