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改卷感悟 对作文分为以下几个等级进行打分： 0分，2分，5分，8分，11分，14分。 老师评分主要是进行GLOBAL READING， 三、评分原则 1、总体评分（Global Scoring），奖励分（Reward Scores） 2、内容和形式的综合评判。 四、给等级分 五个等级分：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分 2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错 误。 5分—基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重的错误。 8分—基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文字连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有一些是严重 错误。 11分—切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分—切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。仅有个别小错误。 字数不足酌情扣分。 累计字数 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 ∠49 扣分 1 2 3 5 7 9 Sample 1 I like sports. It take me more porfit. The first one is health as well know. The second is relaxation. After learning in school, I like make some movement, just as running. It can relax myself. Although there has some many other positive aspects of sports, there also has so may negative aspects of sports. It make someone damagours, because you would hurt in sport, just like football. It is most likely to happy but it could not provent people frome sports. I think that sports take more profit than damguos to me. I like sports. Sample 2 Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. There is no doubt that proper activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism to failure. But sports can do some harm to those people who can not plan their activities properly. Too hard training may hurt their bodies, exhaust their vigor, even cause them to be sick. In general, I love sports. I enjoy sports. I feel that I not only gain a well-balanced life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I perform in a decent way. 1． 大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确