托福写作：主体段示例评分讲解.docx

写作主体段示例 Numerous choices may overwhelm people since the process of making analysis of every option is exhausting. 主题句清晰扼要，避免基本语法错误，适当句式升级 Faced with an array of opportunities during decision-making procedure, people have the tendency to become depressed. 支撑句加强主题句 As the overall life quality has been improved recently, human beings begin to realize it is much more difficult to distinguish between good and better instead of between good and bad. 主题句和论证首发之间一定要有过渡 Take the famous theory in Psychology, buyer’s remorse, for example, which refers to how customers usually regret about their previous purchase and assume the possibility of a better deal. 采用对比、说明、举例论证 Such phenomenon is no rarely seen in daily life. 例子说完后要加以解释，否则仅仅是陈列了论据和论点，却没有明确解释其中关系，衔接性会扣分 Yet sadly, the exposure to different possibilities results in extra burdens for decision makers. 段末总结句突出论证首发和主题句关系 Through artistic work, designers remind people about the importance of art appreciation.(TS句)。。。对比论证。。。In this sense, art not only offers us selections in daily life to represent in daily life to represent our own personalities but also inspires us in understanding what beauty truly is.(句末总结句突出论证手法) 复杂句式的使用和长短句搭配 词性的灵活使用 多用逻辑连接词 排比、反问、设问 机改：语法、用法、mechanics（论证过程、方法）、style、organization development 人改：论据组织、作者立场、审题（对问题精准判断）、外部数据的使用（引用论证和说明论证） 学习范文： 找点（新颖、逻辑性强） 表达 例子 下面介绍几种不同寻常的开头方法（靠SAT的盆友们可考虑用下） 一，坦白从宽法 第一句话就诗意点出论点，这样的开头观点一目了然，很受北美人喜爱 topic??do?you?agree?or?disagree---planning?contributes?to?creativity Planning?is?the?cornerstone?of?the?creative?process.?Effective?planning?establishes?the?parameters?the?confines,?in?which?true?creativity?emerges.?Those?who?fail?to?effectively plan?will?rarely?achieve?the?heights?of?creativity?reached?by?those?who?carefully?and?meticulously?plan. 这是我最喜欢的开头方法之一。 二，渐入佳境法。 以一个事例开头，引出你想支持的观点。个人觉得用于一边倒的文章较好。 topic??name?one?of?the?major?problem?in?your?school? On?Monday?morning,?October?20,?i?arrived?in?school?to?find?every?locker?door?in?my?corridor?standing?ajar.?Over?the?