201312月CET4真题作文与翻译概要.ppt

CET 4 写作讲解 外国语学院 刘长秀 四级作文分值及时间 写作 短文写作 15% 30分钟 作文评分标准 本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次： 13-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 10-12分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。 7-9分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当 多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 1-3分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 0分 未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。 备注：1. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分， 61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。 2．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。 ? Writing 提纲作文 1）文章内容：切题合理即可。 2）思路逻辑：句意通顺，文字流畅。 3）文字表现：无语法错误，个别小错误可忽略 4）文章结构：建议写三段 Writing 文章内容： 审题— 列提纲— 打开思路 语言质量： 词汇正确 词汇多变：如 main reasons 可替代为 primary, essential, fundamental 等。 写的对 写的多 Writing 文章造句： 丰富句型句式：倒装句，强调句，插入语等。 多用词组 English is important for us. English is of great importance for us. English plays an important role in our life. ? My View on Online Shopping With the rapid development of science and technology, an increasing number of online shopping malls and E-shops have?sprung up?in?our?life, such as Taobao, Dangdang, Jingdong etc. Nowadays, more and more people enjoy conducting the shopping activities online and on wonder the volume of trade?reached to 35.019 billion yuan on 11th, November. Different people, however, have different views on online shopping. Some of them approval of it. They believe that shopping on the internet is more convenient, time-saving and cheaper than the goods in the local stores. While others argue that this kind of new way of purchasing have some negative aspects. They think they just look at the pictures instead of touching, smelling, or tasting the goods, so they aren’t absolutely certain about their quality. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former one. On the one hand, I dont like going window-shopping because the shop keepers are always persuasive and I am likely to be taken in. On the other hand, the after-sales