翻译 第三章 篇章的翻译.pptVIP

照 应 例3：She noticed he’s said “making” pictures. “You make pictures, not take them？” “Yes. At least that’s how I think of it. That’s the difference between Sunday snap shooters and someone who does it for a living...” 译文：她注意到了他说“制作”照片。“你制作照片，而不是拍摄照片？” “是的。至少我这样想。这就是星期日业余照相者和以此为生的人的区别……” 解析：英语原句用That指“她”刚才说过的话和已经提到过的事情。这种情况一般在汉语中用“这”而不用“那”来表示。译者把“that”译做“这”而不是“那”，意思表达清楚，符合汉语习惯。 例4：To be or not to be： that is a question. 译文：生还是死，这是一个问题。 解析：在本句，that回指上文提到的to be or not to be，在主语照应中，即发话者指称上文的陈述时，汉语与英语的表达不同。所以译为汉语时要将that替换为与指示相照应的汉语指称“这”。 照 应 例5：To take such things seriously， that is what I should never do. 译文：对这样的事情较真，这是我永远不会做的。 解析：如果外指名词词组是动词不定式短语、动名词短语、介词短语或从句，英语一般用that指代。 例6：Health is above wealth， for this cannot give so much happiness as that. 译文：健康比财富更重要，因为财富不能像健康那样给人带来幸福。 解析：用于指称前面两项内容时，英语前者用this，后者用that。译成汉语时，需要恢复指称内容。 衔 接 例2：人们公认，这13年是我国综合国力大幅度跃升、人民得到实惠最多的时期，是我国社会长期保持安定团结、政通人和的时期，是我国国际影响显著扩大、民族凝聚力极大增强的时期。 译文：As is universally recognized, the 13 years has been a period in which China’s overall national strength has risen by a big margin, the people have received more tangible benefits than ever before, and China has enjoyed long-term social stability and solidarity and has a good government and a united people. China’s influence in the world has grown notably, and the cohesion of the nation has increased remarkably. 解析：汉语重复三个“的时期”，英语把它们合并，共同译为“in which”。 例3： “好哇，大风，你就使劲地刮吧。你现在刮得越大，秋后的雨水就越充足。刮吧，使劲地刮吧。刮来个丰收的好年景，刮来个富强的好日子。” 译文：“All right, wind！ Roar as hard as you like. The stronger you blow now, the more rain we will get in autumn. Come on！ You’ll give us a good harvest and bring us a good life.” 解析：汉语中重复使用了六次动词“刮”。而英译文中分别使用了同义词roar、blow和come on，并且仅使用了三次。 衔 接 例2：我翻了个身，朦胧地又将入梦，突然那声音又将我唤醒。在嗒，嗒的小响外，这次我又听得了呼——呼——的巨声。是北风的怒吼罢？抑是“人”的觉醒？我不能决定。但是我的血沸腾，我似乎已经飞出了房间，跨在北风的颈上，砉然驱驰于长空！ 译文：I turned over, and was about to drift back hazily into my dream when suddenly the sound awoke me again. This time, besides that slight tap-tapping, I heard also a great howling sound. W