2016年高考英语命题作文写作技巧课件.pptVIP

Teaching goals -----教学目标 How to make an outline How to pick out important points How to write beautiful sentences How to organize the sentences logically 假设你是李华,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机.因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件. 1.问题: 手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修. 2.要求: 公司应尽快予以更换. 注意:1.词数为120左右; 2.参考词汇: 配件(spare part) The style: exposition（说明文） The main idea: Present the problems with the phone and ask for a change Person: the first person第一人称 Tense: the present tense 现在式 and the past tense过去式 Task2 提炼要点,确定重点词汇,划分段落 Important points：three problems plus one demand 要点： 三个问题加一个要求 Point 1: not ring; not send messages Point 2： sold out; not change…for… 或not exchange…for… 或not replace…with… Point 3： new model; no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain Point 4： require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth. Task 3连词成句 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信 It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages. 2.该产品已售完,无法更换 The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me. 3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 4.要求公司应尽快予以更换 I demand of /require/request your company to change a new one for me as soon as possible. Task 4 提升句子，组句成篇 注意：灵活运用好句式 一.使用非谓语动词(nonfinite verb)使句子简洁高档 二.巧用倒装(inversion )结构增强句子的表现力 三.尝试多样化表达方式,如： 1.感叹句(the exclamatory) 2.with短语 3.定语从句(the attributive clause ) 4.各种名词性从句 5.各种状语从句 (the adverbial clause) 1. 手机不响铃,不能发短信 整合前： It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages. 整合后： 可以造至少两个并列句(or, meanwhile, either ) a. It can’t ring or send short messages. b. It doesn’t ring at all and meanwhile it doesn’t send short messages. （Neither ….nor句式） c. It can neither ring nor send short messages. 可造至少两个