【名师指津】2016年高三英语二轮复习 第三部分 写作 短文改错 仿真模拟 第二组 记叙文课件.pptVIP

(六) Dear dad and mum, I have been very happy in the school. I work hardly in the school every day. After class, I play with my classmates. I spend a lot time doing my homework. of hard After lunch, I play the ping-pong with my friends. Then, I spend some time read my English note. At six o’clock, I have my evening class. After that, I had some spare time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. have notes reading This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.” And I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please or if I am not happy, I will call you either. Yours, Laura too So in me (六) Laura给自己的父母写信，谈到在学校的学习和生活情况。 1. hardly→ hard 根据语境可知，此处理应是指“努力学习”，hard本身就是副词，意为“努力地”，而hardly意为“几乎不”，显然不符合上下文逻辑。 2. 在a lot后加of 由固定短语a lot of意为“很多”可知。 3. 去掉ping-pong前的the 在表示“打球”时，在球类名词前不加任何冠词。 4. read→ reading 由固定结构spend time (in) doing sth.意为“花费时间做某事”可知。 5. note→ notes 因note是可数名词，此处应用复数，意为“笔记”。 6. had→ have 因此处讲的是“规律性的动作”，故用一般现在时。 7. us→ me 根据上下文逻辑可知，此处应该是指“你经常告诉我”，故用me。 8. of→ in 因表“在生活当中”常用介词in。 9. And→ So 根据两句间的逻辑关系可知，此处显然存在因果关系，故用So。 10. either→ too 在肯定句中用too，表“我也……”。 vital adj. 至关重要的 after that 之后 spare time 空闲时间 spend time (in) doing sth. 花费时间做某事 (七) Tommy has a little dog. Her name is Goldier. She is pretty and interested. Tommy loved her very much. The other day, Goldier was out walking with Tommy. loves interesting She cut her paw on a piece of glasses. When they arrived at home, Tommy’s mother thought that the cut was deeply. He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet. to She deep glass The vet was very kind, but he gave her a injection. Then he stitched up(缝合) the cut and put on a bandage. Goldier looks so funny as she walks on three legs, holds her paw as if she has been to war! holding an and (七)