辽宁省锦州市锦州中学高考英语复习课件：提高考作文得分（共35张PPT）.pptVIP

　　要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能： （1）准确使用语法和词汇； （2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。 5. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用介词）. 6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 7.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 8. My father sat in the sofa. He was smoking and reading a newspaper. (with结构) 9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.(越…) 10.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.(同位语从句) 书面表达: Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our hometown! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. ⑩ Thank you. 外语组 张丽颖 * 中学学科 英语高考专题复习 书面表达 what is a good composition? zxxk ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— ————— 1.美观整洁的卷面 2.覆盖了所有的要点 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇 4. 有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 如何算是一篇好文章？ 《2008年高考英语考试大纲》 关于书面表达的要求: How to write a good composition ? 1 一、避免句式单一 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _________the news, they got excited. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. __________________many times, he still repeated the mistak