TOEFL作文实例解析建一个社区商业中心.docVIP

TOEFL作文实例解析：建一个社区商业中心 To Build a Community Shopping Center – YES 　　Topic: It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 　　Since industrialization makes it possible to manufacture large quantities of goods, going shopping has become fairly recreational. Furthermore, transportation keeps everything going easily.?(Furthermore, transportation keeps everything running smoothly.) (1) (“running smoothly”) (A)?Shopping centers have entered the language and life of every citizen. When it comes to whether it is good to build a shopping mall near your apartment, different people have different views. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of setting a shopping center near where we live outweigh the disadvantages. 　　Many people argue that setting a shopping center nearby ushers in more noise, more traffic congestion and more security problems. They would rather go farther to do shopping than let all these bad effects go around in their own community.?(They would rather go out of their way to shop than allow these bad elements enter their community.) (“go out of their way”) (B) 　　Although their concern is quite reasonable, it can be avoidable if we handle the center well. Building a shopping center near where we live may have lots of existent and potential advantages. They go as follows.?(Building a shopping center where we live has a lot of potential advantages, such as the following.) (2) (“potential advantages”) (C) 　　First, it provides more convenience and less time wasted in traffic.?(First, it provides more convenience and reduces time wasted in traffic.)?We can buy whatever we need on the way home leisurely, instead of having to write the task down on a schedule and drive through the heavy traffic to get there.?(We can buy whatever we need leisurely on the way home, instead of having to jot the task down on a schedule and dr