四级12句作文法综述.ppt

漫画寓意类 一、行文思路 第一段：开门见山，简要描述漫画内容，指出漫画寓意。 描述要简洁明快，一般来说一到两句话足矣。切忌抛开漫画内容直接展开讨论。 第二段：表达对漫画寓意的看法。 在写这一段时，尽量摆事实、讲道理，避免空泛的议论，可以从2-3个方面对观点展开论述。 第三段：指出漫画寓意的现实教育意义，或者提出解决问题的建议。 结尾一般不需要实质性的分析，应简明扼要，点到即止。 二、模板学习 Topic 标题 描述漫画段 ① In the cartoon/picture/drawing presented to us, 画面内容. ②进一步阐述画面内容. ③ Obviously, what the picture symbolically illustrate is that the picture/the picture drawing reveals that 画面折射出来的现象. 开门见山直接描述画面内容 进一步阐述画面内容 揭示画面所反映的现实 论证寓意段 ④ However/In fact, 画面寓意/观点.//In fact, many reasons contribute to 上述现象. ⑤ Above all/First of all/To start with/Firstly, 论据一. ⑥ 进一步解释论据一. ⑦ What’s more/Moreover/Then/Secondly, 论据二. ⑧ Finally/In addition进一步解释论据二. ④画面寓意或观点总结 ⑤列举论据一 ⑥进一步解释论据一 ⑦列举论据二 ⑧进一步解释论据二或列举论据三 总结观点段 ⑨ To sum up/ Personally/ In my opinion/ In short, 发表个人意见. ⑩ For one thing, 方法/建议重申一.⑪ For another, 方法/建议重申二. ⑫ Only in this way/ All in all, 段落总结句. ⑨过渡句到个人观点或建议 ⑩阐述方法/建议一 ⑪阐述方法/建议二 ⑫段落总结句 1、分析题目 本题属于漫画寓意类命题。题目中的漫画反映了一个社会现象。在漫画中，老师把一本厚厚的书交给学生，并对他说: “Just think of it as you’re reading a long text-message.”。结合题目中的写作指令，可总结出这幅漫画所反映的社会现象：随着新的电子媒体的出现，文学阅读日渐式微。反而言之，漫画的寓意也正是“文学阅读是重要的”，论述重点是对the importance的论述。 2、安排段落 先简要描述图画内容，引入主题（第一段，为描述漫画段）；然后阐述阅读文学作品的重要性（第二段，为论证寓意段）；最后重申阅读文学作品的重要性并提出倡议（第三段，总结观点段）。 3.模板套用 The Importance of Reading Literature ① In the cartoon presented to us, a teacher gives a literature book to the student who is shocked by her action. ② Having observed her student’s response, the teacher tells him “Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.” ③ Obviously, what the cartoon symbolically illustrates is that quite a few students or youngsters are reluctant to read literary works nowadays. ④ In fact, no one can disclaim the importance of reading literature. ⑤ To start with, compared with the “shallow reading” such as scanning micro blogs or text-messages, reading long literary works is a kind of “deep reading” behavior. ⑥ By spending time in reading literature, we can develop and perfect human personality such as being patient and op